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Writing Advice

Not So Great First Drafts

May 4, 2015 by Mia Fox Leave a Comment

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One of my favorite author-written books on the writing process is by Anne Lamott. Her book, “Bird by Bird,” not only gives wonderful advice about characters, plot, and the rest, it offers one very real chapter on our not so great first drafts.

Lamott refers to her writing process as “shitty first drafts” and let’s writers know that this is to be expected. When I first started writing, I wanted it to be great…right from the get-go. But I later learned to welcome every awkward, boring, mundane phrase that comes out of my mind. Do you know why? Because at least something is getting onto the page.

I know that if I can plot out the basic elements of the story, I can later make it great. I’ll add character development, dialogue that embodies those characters, and setting descriptions that take the reader away.

Because I like to bake, I equate the writing process to making a cake. Taking out the ingredients from the cupboard is the boring part. Even assembling the cake is rather mundane as there’s no room for experimentation. Add the wrong proportions of baking soda to flour and you’re doomed. But when it’s finished, you get to frost it and decorate. Forgive the pun, but this is the icing on the cake.

The same applies to your writing. Just get those first drafts down. Then, you can rework them, make them into a piece of art, and send them off into the world where they will find their home.

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Your Mission: To Write

December 22, 2014 by Mia Fox Leave a Comment

Screen shot 2014-12-22 at 8.09.08 AMIf there’s one thing we all have in common at this time of year is that we are BUSY. I challenge you to accept Your Mission: To Write!

My household is probably a bit like yours at this time of year. One distracted husband, three children wanting to be distracted, and two dogs itching for us to be distracted. (The younger dog got into the mistletoe last week, which resulted into an emergency trip to the vet.)

In the midst of holiday shopping, cooking for parties, and taking care of kids who are off from school, how do you find time to write? I realized that the time isn’t going to magically appear like Santa with his sleigh. I have to make the time. Here are my top three suggestions for keeping the writing flow going even during the holidays.

1. Set a schedule

It doesn’t matter what time of day you write, just do it. Even if it’s only writing a paragraph, it will set the stage for tomorrow’s session. For me, I write first thing in the morning before the kids realize we haven’t done anything. They’re still in their p.j.s and haven’t had time to get bored, thus requiring my attention.

2. Download some tunes

Music is a great inspiration for writing. Determine a scene in your book, even if it’s a future one. Find a song that perfectly describes the mood of that scene — upbeat, melancholy, desperate, happy, angry. Listen and take notes about how you feel. Those notes are going to find a place in your writing.

3. Be observant

With so many people rushing about it’s a perfect time to watch for interesting behavior. Tired of waiting in line? Go ahead and eavesdrop. The holidays tend  to bring out heightened emotions whether good or bad. We have high expectations during this time of year and that means human nature is ripe to be picked and selected as part of your next story.

Got another suggestion? I’d love to hear about it!

 

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Where Do I Get My Ideas by Kassandra Lamb

December 5, 2014 by Mia Fox Leave a Comment

I’m honored that author Kassandra Lamb has agreed to guest post on my blog today. Here, she discusses, “Where Do I Get My Ideas.” This guest post is a continuation of a blog tour by My Family’s Heart for Kassandra’s latest novel, “Fatal Forty-Eight.”

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I hear that question a lot. For me, getting the idea has never been a problem. I’ve always had an overactive imagination. This is probably true for fiction writers in general.

In my case, that lively imagination is coupled with a slightly paranoid streak. This morbid tendency may not be all that healthy, but it does come in handy when one writes mysteries.

Writers start with a “what if” scenario. What if this happened, or that happened? After my first book was published, my paranoia kicked in and I was inordinately concerned about others plagiarizing my ideas. That got me wondering how one would prove that they had not plagiarized another person’s ideas. How do you prove a negative?

This led to the idea for my second book, ILL-TIMED ENTANGLEMENTS, which is a romantic suspense story.

This newest release, FATAL FORTY-EIGHT, started with “What if a therapist were kidnapped from his/her office?” Therapists trust that new clients coming into their offices for the first time are on the up-and-up. It’s one of those areas where people still operate on faith in their fellow human beings, kind of like when women assume no one will mess with their purse when they get up to take communion in church or to dance at a social gathering.

Hmm… *rubs chin* What if a thief stole from womens’ purses at a dance and one happened to have a secret letter in her wallet?

Uh, where was I? Oh yeah, that kidnapping scenario was the beginning of the idea for this new thriller. Then I decided to make the kidnapper a serial killer, and I was off and running.

Um, stay tuned. I may just write that one about the secret letter. *files idea in mental file drawer marked “Paranoid Scenarios”* 😀

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    What’s in a Name?

    September 15, 2014 by Mia Fox Leave a Comment

    Many authors take on pen names for various reasons. It could be that their real name isn’t easily searchable, the spelling is difficult, their family wants privacy, or maybe they’re an erotica writer and their day job is something more conservative. So what’s in a name? It’s fine to create a pseudonym, but remember that for every pen name you create, that’s another set of social media you must promote.

    I heard a funny story about author pen-names recently. The organizers of a writers’ conference were sorting through their registrations and came across a case of mistaken identity. Note that actual names have been changed to protect the identity…
    They found that Amy Davis was really Susan Delaney, but she writes as Misty Rios for her romance series, and she writes thrillers as Dame Queensland, and she uses the name Rachel Robinson for her romantic suspense books. However, Amy/Misty/Dame/Rachel’s birth name is actually Steven Watson…a man!

    It wouldn’t bother me in the least to discover that my favorite romance author was actually a man. After all, I’m a huge Nicholas Sparks fan and he writes romance better than any as noted by the number of books he has penned that have been adapted into movies.

    I just feel that changing your name for every genre is a lot of work to go through. Imagine if you had to find and build a new audience for every one of your books? When Nora Roberts, romance writer, wanted to pen thrillers she was concerned that her romance readers would be surprised and perhaps even disappointed when they picked up her new titles. She created the pseudonym of J.D. Robb, but was quick to let her readers know that the new name was actually her own. That way, readers could decide if they wanted to try out the new style.

    I write humorous erotica under the name Lola Bond, but those covers display, “Mia Fox writing as Lola Bond.” As writers, we’re creative folk and it’s natural to want to try different styles. But you can have your cake and eat it too. Sure, try out a new pen name, but let your readers know that it’s still wonderful you.

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    Betas Keep it Real

    September 8, 2014 by Mia Fox Leave a Comment

    When I wrote my first book I didn’t know about beta readers…yes, I was young and stupid. Now, the idea of not having someone read my work before I present it to the world seems as ridiculous as buying a dress without first trying it on. Authors need beta readers to ensure they don’t arrive at the party in a dress that’s two sizes too small. Betas keep it real.

    If you’re already using betas, do you simply send out your draft and wait for comments or do you provide questions that will help your betas help you?Here are some questions you can ask your beta readers that will not only get them thinking about your writing in detail, it will also help determine if any editing and rewriting would be beneficial.

    * Did the story pull you in from the beginning?
    * Did the story hold your interest until the end?
    * At any point did you lose interest or stop caring?
    Was the main character relatable?
    * Were the supporting characters interesting and did they add to the story?
    * Did any characters seem unnecessary?
    * Was the setting as interesting as the characters? Were the descriptions realistic and detailed?
    What part was your favorite?
    Was this a book that would keep you up at night reading?
    Were there any parts that seemed like they dragged on?
    Were there any aspects that seemed repetitive?
    Were there any parts that didn’t provide enough detail?
    Were there any inconsistencies either in the story’s timeline or in the actions of the characters that didn’t match the story plot?
    Were there too many characters to keep track of or were some too similar to each other?
    Was the dialogue interesting and natural?
    Was the ending satisfying?
    * And of course, was the book grammatically sound?

    Asking your betas to weigh in with such detailed questions is no doubt opening a can of worms. Chances are, they will find some areas to criticize. But isn’t that the point of having your work read pre-publication? To present your best writing to your readers, take the time to work with your betas. Your ultimate reader will thank you for it.

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